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Is advertisement successful way to persuade people to buy things or not

Is advertisement successful way to persuade people to buy things or not wBYme

If there were no advertisements given to us when buying things, I think that we won't be as much attracted yo a particular product or service as after receiving advertisements. From my experience I was persuaded to buy a little expensive bag which was designed with the collaboration of my favorite athlete. If my favorite athlete didn't collaborated with the bag producing company, and didn't appear on TV commercial for that bag, I wouldn't have bought it. However TV commercials, the most powerful and influential shape of advertisements, has become so common that many people has become tired of watching these commercials. There are some people who even turn off their TVs when commercials begin! In my opinion, I think that advertising is extremely successful at persuading people to buy things. Much or less, people are influenced by being advertised. There might be people who didn't even know about the particular product if they weren't advertised.

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given
 to us when buying things, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that we won't be as much attracted yo a particular product or service as after receiving advertisements. From my experience I was persuaded
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 expensive bag which was designed
 with the collaboration of my favorite athlete. If my favorite athlete didn't The verb 'didn't' requires base form of this verb: "collaborate"collaborate
collaborated
 with the bag producing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
, and didn't appear on TV You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprofitablefinancialwholesalemonetaryeconomicprofit-making
commercial
 for that bag, I wouldn't have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 it. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 TV commercials, the most powerful and influential shape of advertisements, has become This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 common that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
If 'people' is plural here, don't use the third-person singular verb.havehaven
has
 become tired of watching these commercials. There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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people
 who even turn off their TVs when commercials This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
!

In my opinion, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that advertising is extremely
 successful at persuading You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 things. Much or less, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
are influenced
 by being advertised
. There might be You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 who didn't even know about the particular product if they weren't advertised. 