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My opion about advertising

My opion about advertising xmq5a

I agree that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. That's because there are many advertising in our smartphone, PC or road. So we can see them unconsciously and we are interested in it. So advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to do. Also, I disagree that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it too. That's because we see very much advertising every day, so it is common for us to see advertisings. However now there are many CM on TV, so we can see them without seeing consciously. By doing this, we have opportunities that we are interested in things and sometimes we buy them.

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agree
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buy
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because
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so
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because
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very
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see
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advertisings
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However
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now
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many
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CM
 on TV, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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see
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. By doing this, we have opportunities that we are interested
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sometimes
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buy
 them. 