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Is a university degree necessary to get a good job?

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We can see that a university degree plays a huge role in the future if we want to get a good job. So what if we do not have a college degree? In fact, many people who do not have university can have great jobs with high income. For example, C. Ronaldo can make a huge income from playing football. He does not have a university degree, he just plays his favourite sport, but he can earn 1 million dollars from a goal. Or Steve Jobs, who invented Apple, is a billionaire and he also does not have a university degree. It is noticeable that a university degree is just a means to make it easier for us to get a better job, not the only option. Thus, successful people always have their own way. We can not be sure for our own future, but we can strive for the present. Therefore, we do not need to care about degrees. Besides, we can do the best jobs at the present. It is not mean that an university degree is not important, but it is a short way to get a good job with a high salary.
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IELTS essay Is a university degree necessary to get a good job?

Essay
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1 paragraphs
196 words
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