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INVESTING ON SELF IS IMPORTANT

INVESTING ON SELF IS IMPORTANT 66VOW

A person who invests his time in work in a company makes his boss rich. A person who buys a product or service from a company will make that businessman rich. A person who invests his time in making himself skilled and knowledgeable will make him rich one day. A person with new ideas is always welcomed by society and the world. An efficient person makes himself better to the outside world rather than live for others perception. Learning is a great tool that is carried out throughout the entire lifetime. Making money is a skill that makes it permanent in every period of a lifetime. So when basics are slow and effective, the more stronger and efficient in the future. Make time for own self is a fully satisfying life that one needs.

A You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerbodylifewomansomebodycharacter
person
 who invests his time in work in a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturecomposeprepareformproducecause
makes
 his boss rich. A You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerbodylifewomansomebodycharacter
person
 who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchases
buys
 a product or service from a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 will You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturecomposeprepareformproducecause
make
 that businessman rich. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
A
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerbodylifewomansomebodycharacter
person
 who invests his time in making himself skilled and knowledgeable will You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturecomposeprepareformproducecause
make
 him rich one day. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
A
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerbodylifewomansomebodycharacter
person
 with new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtsconceptsnotions
ideas
 is always welcomed by society and the world. An efficient You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerbodylifewomansomebodycharacter
person
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturecomposeprepareformproducecause
makes
 himself better to the outside world rather
 than This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 for others perception. Learning is a great tool that is carried
 out throughout the entire lifetime. Making money is a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
 that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturecomposeprepareformproducecause
makes
 it permanent in every period of a lifetime. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 when basics are slow and effective, the Use only "stronger" (without 'more') when you use the comparative.stronger
more stronger
 and efficient in the future. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturecomposeprepareformproducecause
Make
 time for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 self is a fully
 satisfying life that one needs. 