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Fast food is a part of life in many places

Fast food is a part of life in many places 9rWK7
Food is one the basic necessities of life to exist. If you get a better taste on your need, it will prove out to be cherry on the cake. Similar is the work done by fast food with lots of variety and the spices works wonder due which it has became a habit of many at many places. There are always questions running around the hygiene and healthiness contained in fast food. To grow fit and strong taste is not only the thing that matters, what is more essential is the vitamins and the minerals you obtain from your diet. On comparing the junk food with healthy diet, its show vast difference awarding the later to be with more ingredients that are really essential for body for different processes and pull up the immune power. While on contrast the fast food contains excess of sweet poison and chemicals which plays critical role in preserving them over long period of time. Junk food has the main ingredients of bread and ketchups in most cases. Bread is generally a fibreless food which is quite hard to digest compared to the fibrous eatables which are light and easy to metabolize which results in starting of stomach problems arising due to improper digestion and constipation on consumption of breads. Another main part of junk food is ketchup which uses multiple preservatives, chemical, and essence to improve the taste of food without a look at its effect on health. Thus on a long term run, fast food can lead to serious health problems affecting the lifestyle and diet of an individual in a negative manner The graph illustrates the number of electrical appliances used in household over a century. Overall trend of images utilising of washing machines, refrigerator and vacuum cleaner has increased by huge amounts in span of 100 years. In 1920 the lifestyle shows washing machine and vacuum cleaner has far more popularity than refrigerator. During 1940 all the appliance showed similar popularity in household. But over the course of time refrigerator has managed the gain its importance in household over the other two which is clearly reflected at 1960. Refrigerator is marked to be one the most important household electrical appliance as by 1980 every household was equipped with it. Though not remaining behind was vacuum cleaner which achieved the same feet as former by 2000. Washing machine initially had the largest share but did not show appreciable growth for being fitted in household. Overall there has always been increase use of electrical appliances in household except only the decline in use of washing machine for year 1980.
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Food
is
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one
the
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basic necessities
of life to exist. If you
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get
a better taste on your need, it will prove out to be cherry on the cake. Similar is the work done by
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fast
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food
with lots of variety and the spices works wonder due which it has
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became
a habit of
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many
at
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many
places.

There are always questions running around the hygiene and healthiness contained in
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fast
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food
. To grow fit and strong taste is not
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only
the thing that matters,
what is more
essential is the vitamins and the minerals you obtain from your diet. On comparing the junk
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food
with healthy diet, its
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
vast difference awarding the
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later
to be with more ingredients that are
really
essential for body for
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different
processes and pull up the immune power. While on contrast the
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fast
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food
contains excess of sweet poison and chemicals which plays critical role in preserving them
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over
long period of time.

Junk
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food
has the main ingredients of bread and
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ketchups
in most cases
. Bread is
generally
a
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fibreless
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food
which is quite
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hard
to digest compared to the fibrous eatables which are light and easy to metabolize which results in starting of stomach problems arising due to improper digestion and constipation on consumption of breads. Another main part of junk
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food
is ketchup which
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uses
multiple preservatives, chemical, and essence to
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improve
the taste of
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food
without a look at its effect on health.

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Thus
on a long term run,
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fast
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food
can lead to serious health problems affecting the lifestyle and diet of an individual in a
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negative
manner

The graph illustrates the number of electrical
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appliances
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used
in
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household
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over
a century.
Overall
trend of images
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utilising
of washing
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machines
,
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refrigerator
and vacuum cleaner has increased by huge amounts in span of 100 years.

In 1920 the lifestyle
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shows
washing
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machine
and vacuum cleaner has far more popularity than
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refrigerator
. During 1940 all the
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appliance
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showed
similar popularity in
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household
.
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But
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over
the course of time
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refrigerator
has managed the gain its importance in
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household
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over
the other two which is
clearly
reflected at 1960.
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Refrigerator
is marked
to be
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one
the most
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important
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household
electrical
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appliance
as by 1980 every
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household
was equipped
with it. Though not remaining behind was vacuum cleaner which achieved the same feet as former by 2000. Washing
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machine
initially
had the largest share
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but
did not
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show
appreciable growth for
being fitted
in household.

Overall
there has always been increase
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use
of electrical
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appliances
in
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household
except
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only
the decline in
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use
of washing
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machine
for year 1980.
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IELTS essay Fast food is a part of life in many places

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
436 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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