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Within a fast-paced society, reliance on fossil fuel usage belongs to the norm but it is to a point that the utilization is harming our environment. With that being said, our government had stepped up on their duty to warn the citizens on cutting the usage of fossil fuels. This essay addresses how dire this situation is as the consumption of fossil fuels brings pollution to the environment and suggestions to replace the natural resources.
Within a
fast
-paced society, reliance on fossil fuel usage belongs to the norm
but
it is to a point that the utilization is harming our environment. With that
being said
, our
government
had stepped up on their duty to warn the citizens on cutting the usage of fossil fuels. This essay addresses how dire this situation is as the consumption of fossil fuels brings pollution to the environment and suggestions to replace the natural resources.
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IELTS essay the international community has asked the

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
75 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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