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Introduction in presentation

Introduction in presentation 8dGDB
Good morning everyone. Let me briefly introduce myself first. My name Duong. Today, I’m so delighted to have a chance to talk to all of you. What I’d like to present to you today is Unemployment of students after graduation. In my presentation, I’ll focus on three major issues and spend 7 minutes to Help you know how unemployment is happening nowadays. Therefore, you will know what you need to do and then, have a specific career orientation to avoid joblessness after graduation. . If you have any questions, don’t hesitate to ask me at the end of my talk, I am always willing to answer you.
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briefly
introduce myself
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. My name
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Duong
.
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Today
, I’m
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so
delighted to have a chance to talk to all of you. What I’d like to present to you
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today
is Unemployment of students after graduation. In my presentation, I’ll focus on three major issues and spend 7 minutes to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Help
you know how unemployment is happening nowadays.
Therefore
, you will know what you need to do and then, have a specific career orientation to avoid joblessness after graduation.
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.
If you have any questions, don’t hesitate to ask me at the
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end
of my talk, I am always willing to answer you.
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IELTS essay Introduction in presentation

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
107 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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