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Introducing two or more foreign languages in the school curriculum has been in trend lately. Do you think the benefits of this trend outweigh its drawbacks.

Introducing two or more foreign languages in the school curriculum has been in trend lately. Do you think the benefits of this trend outweigh its drawbacks. PWqkj
It has been observed latterly that many school are including multiple foreign language in their curriculum. In my viewpoint, the rewards of studying two or more non-native dialect surpass the challenges of doing so. My preference is explained further Most importantly, it has been specifically proved that children learning multiple international lingo have several cognitive benefits. Studies have conclude that pupils who were made to learn English, Spanish, French, and German in an elementary school in Scotland exhibited improved memory, better problem solving ability, were able to do critical analysis of a situation more effectively, had enhanced concentration on a task, superior listening skills and a more fitting competency to multitask compared to those students who studied just a single language. To add to this, such a learning help children to become polyglot. This is to state that not only improve communication skill but also add unimaginable amount of vocabulary, grammar functions and divergent ways of thinkin. This also helps the young learners to fortify the first tongue too. Moreover, introducing several foreign language would never be a bother for youngster because they grasp any concept faster at the tender age. To sum up, the recent mindset of introducing manifold languages in the school timetable is indeed an excellent foresight. The globalized world requires individuals and professionals who are multilinguistic; and the schools are following the well known saying "Catch them young". This will have a significant impact on world economy as well as culture.
It has
been observed
latterly
that
many
school
are including multiple foreign language in their curriculum. In my viewpoint, the rewards of studying two or more non-native dialect surpass the challenges of doing
so
. My preference is
explained
further


Most
importantly
, it has been
specifically
proved that children learning multiple international lingo have several cognitive benefits. Studies have
conclude
that pupils who
were made
to learn English, Spanish, French, and German in an elementary
school
in Scotland exhibited
improved
memory, better problem solving ability, were able to do critical analysis of a situation more
effectively
, had enhanced concentration on a task, superior listening
skills
and a more fitting competency to multitask compared to those students who studied
just
a single language.

To
add
to this, such a learning
help
children to become polyglot. This is to state that not
only
improve
communication
skill
but
also
add
unimaginable amount of vocabulary, grammar functions and divergent ways of
thinkin
. This
also
helps
the young learners to fortify the
first
tongue too.
Moreover
, introducing several foreign language would never be a bother for youngster
because
they grasp any concept faster at the tender age.

To sum up, the recent mindset of introducing manifold languages in the
school
timetable is
indeed
an excellent foresight. The globalized world requires individuals and professionals who are
multilinguistic
; and the
schools
are following the well known saying
"
Catch them young
"
. This will have a significant impact on world economy
as well
as culture.
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IELTS essay Introducing two or more foreign languages in the school curriculum has been in trend lately. Do you think the benefits of this trend outweigh its drawbacks.

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