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There are many social sites which are used by people nowadays discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the social sites

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Social sites are an essential part of the life of everyone there are various kinds of social sites suggest Instagram Facebook WhatsApp effect benefits and drawbacks I discuss the both in the upcoming Passage to begin with the advantages of the social sites it has become an important part of the life of everyone we can see in our daily life almost all strength around us are used to show your sides with the help of Social Science Students can do study online we can share any important information we can see entertainment videos on social sites with the help of social sites We can attach with their friends and relatives we can listen to news of our country and the world during the period of Corona pandemic we can see now how much people fight with the Corona
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various kinds of
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suggest Instagram Facebook WhatsApp effect benefits and drawbacks I discuss the both in the upcoming Passage to
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begin
with the advantages of the
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it has become an
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important
part of the life of everyone we can
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in our daily life almost all strength around us are
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your sides with the
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Science Students can do study online we can share any
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important
information we can
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see
entertainment videos on
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social
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sites
with the
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help
of
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social
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sites
We can attach with their friends and relatives we can listen to news of our country and the world during the period of Corona pandemic we can
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see
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
how much
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people
fight with the Corona
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IELTS essay There are many social sites which are used by people nowadays discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the social sites

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
138 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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