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Introducing a song that you like

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Another song that I want to share with you guys. This song is " When we were young ". It's Adele's again. Maybe I need to make a playlist of hers. “When We Were Young” is the follow-up track from Adele’s third album “25” released after the tearful single “Hello”. This song was composed by Adele with musician Tobias Jesso Jr. “When We Were Young” is not as successful as "Rolling in the Deep", "Hello", "Set the world on fire", or "Someone like you" but for someone, it's a masterpiece. Talking about the inspiration to write it, Adele shared that she thinks about people who have walked through her life, from the relative to the stranger, there will be times we don't have enough time to care for each other and gradually become strangers. Then imagining the day when we will 50 years old and suddenly will meet all of these guys at the party, we will feel like we come back to 15 years old again.
Another song that I want to share with you guys. This song is
"
When we were young
"
. It's Adele's again. Maybe I need to
make
a playlist of hers. “When We Were Young” is the follow-up
track
from Adele’s third album “25” released after the tearful single “Hello”. This song
was composed
by Adele with musician Tobias
Jesso
Jr. “When We Were Young” is not as successful as
"
Rolling in the Deep
"
,
"
Hello
"
,
"
Set the world on fire
"
, or
"
Someone like you
"
but
for someone, it's a masterpiece. Talking about the inspiration to write it, Adele shared that she
thinks
about
people
who have walked through her life, from the relative to the stranger, there will be times we don't have
enough
time to care for each other and
gradually
become strangers. Then imagining the day when we will 50 years
old
and
suddenly
will
meet
all of these guys at the party, we will feel like we
come
back to 15 years
old
again.
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IELTS essay Introducing a song that you like

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
167 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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