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introduce yourself and tell about your job

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My name is Mohamed, and I am 26 years old. I live in Shiraz since I was born with my family. I've got a brother four years younger than me. I graduated in electrical engineering in 1397. at the time, I'm working at Alex steel Complex in shiraz. They're training us to make better, skillful, and capable engineers. They give an exam after every course. I generally wake up at 6: 30, except on the weekends. I usually make espresso coffee and take it with me to work. I go to work by bus. I get on the bus at 6: 45, and I get to my workplace by 7: 50. I love watching movies and shows, especially those with the genre of action, comedy, crime, and mystery. I enjoy reading books, and I try to fill my free time with them. I'd rather read motivational and crime novels.

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 enjoy reading books, and I try to fill my free time with them. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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