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In "Weekend with Samatat", the participants had done their session properly. " Camping from home" was the part of Splash of CREA TVT & the trainer gave them a simple task; the participants have to make a tent in their house with home tools & they have finished the task happily. They show us their creativity & it makes us happy. We like to show you guys as well.

In "Weekend with Samatat", the participants had done their session properly. " Camping from home" was the part of Splash of CREA TVT & the trainer gave them a simple task; the participants have to make a tent in their house with home tools & they have finished the task happily. They show us their creativity & it makes us happy. We like to show you guys as well. 7r09k
In "Weekend with Samatat", the participants had done their session properly. " Camping from home" was the part of Splash of CREA TVT & the trainer gave them a simple task; the participants have to make a tent in their house with home tools & they have finished the task happily. They show us their creativity & it makes us happy. We like to show you guys as well. In "Weekend with Samatat", the participants had done their session properly. " Camping from home" was the part of Splash of CREA TVT & the trainer gave them a simple task; the participants have to make a tent in their house with home tools & they have finished the task happily. They show us their creativity & it makes us happy. We like to show you guys as well. . In "Weekend with Samatat", the participants had done their session properly. " Camping from home" was the part of Splash of CREA TVT & the trainer gave them a simple task; the participants have to make a tent in their house with home tools & they have finished the task happily. They show us their creativity & it makes us happy. We like to show you guys as well.
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Weekend with
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Samatat
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, the
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Camping from home
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was the part of Splash of
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CREA
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house
with home tools & they have finished the
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Weekend with
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Samatat
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"
, the
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participants
had done their session
properly
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"
Camping from home
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"
was the part of Splash of
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CREA
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TVT
& the trainer gave them a simple
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task
; the
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participants
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
make
a tent in their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
with home tools & they have finished the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
task
happily
. They
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
show
us their creativity & it
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makes
us happy. We like to
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show
you guys
as well
.
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IELTS essay In "Weekend with Samatat", the participants had done their session properly. " Camping from home" was the part of Splash of CREA TVT & the trainer gave them a simple task; the participants have to make a tent in their house with home tools & they have finished the task happily. They show us their creativity & it makes us happy. We like to show you guys as well.

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208 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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