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development of honey bee and the process

development of honey bee and the process XV7pE

The picture represents the evolution of a honey bee. There are total six stages involved, in the whole process. The female honey bee lays one or two eggs, every third day. The eggs are incubated and hatch between nine to ten days. After five days a small honey bee comes out of the egg. By the next seven days, it grows a little in size. Subsequently, by the nineth day the nymph or the small baby honey bee increases in girth. Within this period of growth, it also sheds its wings and skin, thrice. Immediately after nine days, a young adult appears. During this whole phenomena, the honey bee keeps gaining length and weight. After four days, a mature honey bee comes into existence. This whole process of evolution takes around 34-36 days. Once the honey bee transforms into an adult one, from an egg, the whole cycle starts all over again.

The picture represents the evolution of a honey bee. There are total six stages involved, in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperfectfull
whole
 process. The female honey bee lays one or two eggs, every third day. The eggs are incubated
 and hatch Use "between" + "and" not "to."  Try this: "between nine and ten".between nine and ten
between nine to ten
 days. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
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small
 honey bee This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
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 seven days, it grows a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 in size. Subsequently
, by the Possible spelling mistake found.ninthninety
nineth
 day the nymph or the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 baby honey bee increases in girth. Within this period of growth, it also
 sheds its wings and skin, thrice.

Immediately after nine days, a young adult appears. During this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperfectfull
whole
 phenomena, the honey bee This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retains
keeps
 gaining length and weight. After four days, a mature honey bee This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 into existence. This You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperfectfull
whole
 process of evolution takes around 34-36 days.

Once the honey bee transforms into an adult one, from an egg, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperfectfull
whole
 cycle This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 all over again. 