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Introduce your hobby of traveling

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My name is Nguyen Ngoc Uyen Nhi, my hobby is travel, i like to travel in the summer and winter. I think i want to go SaPa city because it very beautiful and peaceful. Traveling is fun with friends, go by motorbike helps me experience more. I love to travel aboard, i wish i could go to Paris, it is known as “the capital of light”. Buying souvenirs as a habit, I buy them to make small gifts for my dear. After each trip, I learn the local culture, know more about natural knowledge. Every trip is a new experience.
My name is Nguyen
Ngoc
Uyen
Nhi
, my hobby is travel,
i
like to travel in the summer and winter. I
think
i
want to go
SaPa
city
because
it
very
beautiful
and peaceful. Traveling is fun with friends, go by motorbike
helps
me experience more. I
love
to travel aboard,
i
wish
i
could go to Paris, it
is known
as “the capital of light”. Buying souvenirs as a habit, I
buy
them to
make
small
gifts for my dear. After each trip, I learn the local culture, know more about natural knowledge. Every trip is a new experience.
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IELTS essay Introduce your hobby of traveling

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
100 words
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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