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There are 50 students in my class. My monitor’s name is Khanh Linh. She has short hair and she’s very friendly. My vice monitor is an outgoing person, his name is Dat, he always has an optimistic view on life, it makes him happy all the time. Duong and Quyen are my best friends. Duong is an interesting girl, she loves talking jokes. Quyen is different from Duong, she’s very serious and responsible. Phuong is my tablemate, she has long black hair and brown eyes, she’s very kind because she always gives me a helping hand when I need. Duc is a man but he has a gently voice, he is good at music, he plays guitar very well and I love it. Mai Anh is a good student, she studies very hard and she’s active in every activities. Huong is the tallest person in my class, she’s really friendly and easy to talk to, but sometimes she’s shy. A person with a special name is Phong Hoa, I’m very impressed with her personality, sometimes she has a bit selfish but she’s still nice. And finally, I want to talk about my teacher, she’s very young and beautiful too, she always cares us and listens to our opinions, so we love her so much.
There are 50 students in my
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class
. My monitor’s name is
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Khanh
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Linh
.
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She
has short hair and
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she’s
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very
friendly. My vice monitor is an outgoing person, his name is
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Dat
, he always has an optimistic view on life, it
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makes
him happy all the time.
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Duong
and
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Quyen
are my best friends.
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Duong
is an interesting girl,
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she
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loves
talking jokes.
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Quyen
is
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different
from
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Duong
,
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she’s
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very
serious and responsible.
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Phuong
is my
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tablemate
,
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she
has long black hair and brown eyes,
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she’s
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very
kind
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because
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she
always gives me a helping hand when I need.
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Duc
is a
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man
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but
he has a
You used an adverb ('gently') instead of an adjective, or a noun ('voice') instead of another adjective.
gently voice
, he is
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good
at music, he plays guitar
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very
well and I
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love
it. Mai
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Anh is
a
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good
student,
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she
studies
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very
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hard and
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she’s
active in every
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activities
.
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Huong
is the tallest person in my
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class
,
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she’s
really
friendly and easy to talk to,
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but
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sometimes
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she’s
shy. A person with a special name is
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Phong
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Hoa
, I’m
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very
impressed with her personality,
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sometimes
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she
has a bit selfish
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but
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she’s
still
nice. And
finally
, I want to talk about my teacher,
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she’s
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very
young and
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beautiful
too,
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she
always cares us and listens to our opinions,
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so
we
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love
her
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so
much.
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IELTS essay introduce your classmates

Essay
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1 paragraphs
214 words
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