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Internet is developing nowadays

Internet is developing nowadays Eqx0q

Indeed the internet is evolving very fast today. As a result, too many people do not buy books and newspapers, and instead they get all the news and the books on the phone or compyuter from the internet. I think it's very useful because books and newspapers made of paper, and millions of trees are cut down everyday to make paper paper Almost everyone knows that trees produce oxygen for us. If we cut down trees everyday, if we don't plant them anymore see for a month how we breathe. So we need to use the internet more and plant more trees. I think the internet will be of great benifint to us in this regard.

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Indeed
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very
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fast
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today
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many
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buy
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get
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compyuter
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think
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very
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because
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trees
 are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
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everyday
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make
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trees
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everyday
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see
 for a month how we breathe. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
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use
 the internet more and plant more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsaplingshrubwoodforesttimberseedling
trees
. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
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benifint
 to us in this regard. 