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Internet is a reliable source of information.

Internet is a reliable source of information. peE19
In the last decade, the internet has made it possible to have worldwide communication and be able to access data resources through an overwhelmed collection of public, private, business, academic, and government records within your fingertips.  The impact of the internet across many aspects of modern society is clear enough to see through with the increasing use of web-based social networking services and search engines to gather information in one place.
In the last decade, the internet has made it possible to have worldwide communication and be able to access data resources through an overwhelmed collection of public, private, business, academic, and
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government
records within your fingertips.  The impact of the internet across
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many
aspects of modern society is
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clear
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enough
to
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see
through with the increasing
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use
of web-based social networking services and search engines to gather information in one place.

IELTS essay Internet is a reliable source of information.

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