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"Internet" in our life and the internet

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Internet plays vital role in the modern life. The internet was invented in the late 1960s by the US Defense Department's Advanced Research Projects Agency. We can not think our life without this great invention called internet. Internet has positive and negative effects, also internet has affected the human lives in both ways. Because Internet online communication has become very easy and simple. When we utilaze internet, we get loads of information. But now, we just need to connect our internet to open some social networking websites and opening Gmail or other accounts to send messages within seconds. So the internet. . . is it a boon or a course? This is a very debatable topic. In my opinion, it really depends on how you use a particular technology- used in moderation and in intellegent manner it could be the greatest tool.
Internet plays vital role in the modern life. The internet
was invented
in the late 1960s by the US Defense Department's Advanced Research Projects Agency. We can not
think
our life without this great invention called internet. Internet has
positive
and
negative
effects,
also
internet has
affected
the human
lives
in both ways.
Because
Internet online communication has become
very
easy and simple. When we
utilaze
internet, we
get
loads of information.
But
now
, we
just
need to connect our internet to open
some
social networking websites and opening Gmail or other accounts to
send
messages within seconds.
So
the internet.
.
.
is
it a boon or a course? This is a
very
debatable topic. In my opinion, it
really
depends on how you
use
a particular technology-
used
in moderation and in
intellegent
manner it could be the greatest tool.
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IELTS essay "Internet" in our life and the internet

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
142 words
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