It is an undeniable truth that youngsters are encouraged by their friends, parents and teachers, however, they are more influenced by their friends because of their similar ages and understandings. This phenomenon has both pros and cons which I will discuss in this further essay.
There are myriad advantages of such influence. To initiate with, the knowledge and experience they gain by each others company. To explain it more I would say that, every child needs someone with whom they can share their happiness and sorrows and if, they are their friends they feel more comfortable with them to share anything. Moreover, They can learn an important life skill by encouraging each others like, good communication skills and leadership skills and this helps them in sorting out many difficulties in their life.
Despite having many Benefits of peer pressure, it has some limitations too. To begin with the adoption of bad habits, If any young child is influenced by the person of his age who smoke and drink, they may also involve in that bad habit. Furthermore, Inspiring wealthy people also creates inequality in a person's life. For instance, if youngsters are encouraged by rich people there may be a chance that they demand for the expensive gifts from their parents, which they could not afford.
To conclude and give my opinion, I would say that, encouragement always provides a platform to do something challenging and interesting and as similar to this if young ones follow others positively it will help them more to grow well.
It is an undeniable truth that youngsters
are encouraged
by their friends, parents and teachers,
however
, they are more influenced by their friends
because
of their similar ages and understandings. This phenomenon has both pros and cons which I will discuss in this
further
essay.
There are myriad advantages of such influence. To initiate with, the knowledge and experience they gain by each
others
company
. To
explain
it more I would say that, every child needs someone with whom they can share their happiness and sorrows and if, they are their friends they feel more comfortable with them to share anything.
Moreover
, They can learn an
important
life
skill
by encouraging each others like,
good
communication
skills
and leadership
skills
and this
helps
them in sorting out
many
difficulties in their life.
Despite having
many
Benefits of peer pressure, it has
some
limitations too. To
begin
with the adoption of
bad
habits, If any young child
is influenced
by the person of his age who smoke and drink, they may
also
involve in that
bad
habit.
Furthermore
, Inspiring wealthy
people
also
creates inequality in a person's life.
For instance
, if youngsters
are encouraged
by rich
people
there may be a chance that they demand for the expensive gifts from their parents, which they could not afford.
To conclude
and give my opinion, I would say that, encouragement always provides a platform to do something challenging and interesting and as similar to this if young ones follow others
positively
it will
help
them more to grow well.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes