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instead send them to geriatric homes.

instead send them to geriatric homes. WEXMD
In most countries, people avoid taking care of their old relatives instead send them to geriatric homes. This is because people are getting more occupied in various ways leaving them with nearly no time to care for elderly. It is also easy to take care of the old by specific professionals in those homes. It is clearly feasible for the aging population to be taken care of better by specialised workers compared to relatives. However, tender, love and care recieved from family members can never be replaced. I therefore think It is a real undoing to modernization. Taking care of elderly is differently viewed in various countries. Mostly, they are sent to old age homes. This is because the young members of the family are either busy with education or work related responsibilities. This has left the elderly feel isolated, neglected and forgotten. For example, European countries has relatively more school. going, more working young population. To avoid isolation as well as get good care, they are sent in hands of nursing homes. Although it solves anumber of their needs, it has more disadvantages than advantages. People are sending the old to late age homes more in current world. This has become the norm in recent years. Old age homes has denied the aging to get enough family love. For instance, they cannot trust home workers on personal issues compared family members. It has negatively impacted on them. In conclusion, taking old aged population to special homes is mostly practiced in developed nations. Young people have little time to take of their parents.
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of their
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relatives
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because
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people
are getting more occupied in various ways leaving them with
nearly
no time to
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care
for elderly. It is
also
easy to take
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care
of the
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old
by specific professionals in those
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homes
. It is
clearly
feasible for the aging population to
be taken
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care
of better by
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workers compared to relatives.
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care
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recieved
from
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members can never
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. I
therefore
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think
It is a real undoing to modernization.

Taking
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care
of elderly is
differently
viewed in various countries.
Mostly
, they are
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to
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old
age
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homes
. This is
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the young members of the
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family
are either busy with education or work related responsibilities. This has
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left
the elderly feel isolated, neglected and forgotten.
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, European countries has
relatively
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, more working young population. To avoid isolation
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, they are
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in hands of nursing
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homes
. Although it solves
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of their needs, it has more disadvantages than advantages.

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to late age
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more in
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current
world. This has become the norm in recent years.
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age
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homes
has denied the aging to
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get
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enough
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family
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love
.
For instance
, they cannot trust home workers on personal issues compared
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family
members. It has
negatively
impacted on them.

In conclusion
, taking
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old
aged population to special
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homes
is
mostly
practiced in developed nations. Young
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have
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time to take of their parents.
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IELTS essay instead send them to geriatric homes.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
263 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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