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Instant Noodle Manufacture

Instant Noodle Manufacture aJORG

The flowchart demonstrates the various stages of producing instant noodles. Overall, there are eight key steps in this production, starting with getting the flour in storage silos and ending with sending instant noodles to stores or supermarkets. First of all, flour which is stored in silos is delivered from the flour factory to the noodle manufacturing. After the flour is transported and placed in storage silos, water and oil are added to create a flour mixer. Then, using rollers, this mixture is transformed into dough sheets and then it will cut into thin strips. After that, the noodles are formed into discs and fried in hot oil before being dried to remove any excess oil. Following that, these round-shaped noodles are packaged into an appropriate number of cups, and vegetables and spices are added. These cups are then labeled and sealed. These items are sent to stores or supermarkets immediately as soon as the manufacturing is completed.

The flowchart demonstrates the various stages of producing instant noodles.

Overall
, there are eight key steps in this production, starting with getting the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrate
flour
 in storage silos and ending with sending instant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
 to stores or supermarkets.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrate
flour
 which is stored
 in silos is delivered
 from the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrate
flour
 factory to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodle
 manufacturing. After the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrate
flour
is transported
 and placed in storage silos, water and oil are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to create a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrate
flour
 mixer. Then, using rollers, this mixture is transformed
 into dough sheets and then it will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 into thin strips. After that, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
are formed
 into discs and fried in hot oil This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
being dried
 to remove any excess oil.

Following that, these round-shaped You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
are packaged
 into an appropriate number of cups, and vegetables and spices are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
. These cups are then labeled and sealed. These items are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to stores or supermarkets immediately as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as the manufacturing is completed
. 