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inform the resource change

inform the resource change PLR9E
Resource updates in October 2021: - Binh will rotate out the project on October 25, 2021. - From October 25th onwards, Hong will take over as team leader from Binh. - Anh Vo and Ngan will be in charge of manual tasks, while Day will be in charge of automated tasks, with Hong assisting. - Tran, a new tester, has joined the team and is undergoing training. This quarter, there will be certain adjustments in the team's resource allocation. Hong is making strong work toward taking over from Binh, as well as learning new approaches to automating tasks so that she may take on the position of team leader. However, we continue to do our best to ensure team productivity and quality of work. During the changeover phase, Binh will address all risks and concerns.
Resource updates in October 2021:

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From October 25th onwards, Hong will take over as
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leader from
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Binh
.

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Anh
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and
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will be in charge of manual tasks, while Day will be in charge of automated tasks, with Hong assisting.

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Tran, a new tester, has
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joined
the
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and is undergoing training.

This quarter, there will be certain adjustments in the team's resource allocation. Hong is making strong work toward taking over from
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Binh
,
as well
as learning new approaches to automating tasks
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that she may take on the position of
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team
leader.
However
, we continue to do our best to ensure
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productivity and quality of work.

During the changeover phase,
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Binh
will address all
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risks
and concerns.
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IELTS essay inform the resource change

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
131 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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