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Influence of human beings on the worlds ecosystem

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It is argued that the human actions effect the world’s ecosystem which causes the extinction of species and also loss of bio-diversity. The reasons and solutions for loss of bio-diversity are discussed this essay. Some of the reasons for extinction of species are deforestation, pollution and advancement in technology. In other words, cutting of plants and trees to construct the building resulted in extinction of species. Due to the increase in pollution with the increase in population, effected the life cycle of species which in turn decreased the birth rate of many species. As a result, many species are becoming extinct. For example, in 2018, an article stated that about 60% of plant and animal species became extinct. Some possible solutions to this problem are afforestation and creating awareness among people. Trees should be planted in barren lands. So that the soil becomes fertile, and rare plant species can be grown. Also, trees absorb carbon dioxide and release oxygen, which decreases the pollution. With decrease in pollution, animal species live a healthy life and their reproduce rate can be increased. The other solution is by conducting campaigns and bringing more awareness among people about environment. People should be encouraged to plant a tree and Government should distribute plants to public for free. For instance, the university of London found that ecosystem is improved to65% by conducting awareness programs among people. In conclusion, there is a solution for every problem. Imbalance in ecosystem caused by human activities like deforestation and pollution can be reduced to some extent by afforestation and awareness programs.
It
is argued
that the human actions effect the world’s ecosystem which causes the extinction of species and
also
loss of bio-diversity. The reasons and
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solutions
for loss of bio-diversity
are discussed
this essay.

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reasons for extinction of species are deforestation,
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pollution
and advancement in technology.
In other words
, cutting of
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plants
and
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trees
to construct the building resulted in extinction of species. Due to the increase in
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pollution
with the increase in population, effected the life cycle of species which in turn decreased the birth rate of
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many
species.
As a result
,
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many
species are becoming extinct.
For example
, in 2018, an article stated that about 60% of
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plant
and animal species became extinct.

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Some
possible
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solutions
to this problem are afforestation and creating
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awareness
among
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people
.
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Trees
should
be planted
in barren lands.
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So
that the soil becomes fertile, and rare
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plant
species can
be grown
.
Also
,
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trees
absorb carbon dioxide and release oxygen, which decreases the
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pollution
. With decrease in
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pollution
, animal species
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live
a healthy life and their reproduce rate can
be increased
. The other
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solution
is by conducting campaigns and bringing more
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awareness
among
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people
about environment.
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People
should
be encouraged
to
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plant
a
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tree
and
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Government
should distribute
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plants
to public for free.
For instance
, the
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university of London
found that ecosystem is
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improved
to65% by conducting
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awareness
programs among
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people
.

In conclusion
, there is a
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solution
for every problem. Imbalance in ecosystem caused by human activities like deforestation and
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pollution
can be
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reduced
to
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some
extent by afforestation and
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awareness
programs.
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IELTS essay Influence of human beings on the worlds ecosystem

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
261 words
6.5
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