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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.41

I do not agree with the statement that individuals cannot do anything to improve the environment. Taking care of the environment cannot be the sole responsibility of any government or large companies. This is a responsibility of all. Government and large companies consist of people who live in a particular country and they are also responsible individually to take care. The government can enact legislations and enforce them to make sure that all citizens of a country abide by them. Large companies can influence their staff when they undertake measures to take care of the environment and in the process influence their consumers through advertising and promotion. I live in Bangladesh, a country situated in South Asia. My country has the longest beach and over time with increased tourists and the associated hotels and businesses around that place it has become rather dirty. Once of the largest conglomerates undertook an initiative as part of their CSR efforts to keep the beach clean. They engaged local students and youth in collecting debris and other things that were making the place dirty. The company also worked with the local government to put in bins at various locations at the beach and coming up rules and regulations to help keep the beach clean. The local government ensured that anyone who is not abiding by the new rules of the beach are either warned or penalized as necessary. The company had extensive promotion around keeping the beach clean and even involved influencing people such as local celebrities to convey the message. Over time people became more conscious and the beach gradually became cleaner. I feel this is an excellent example of how not only government and large companies but also the local people and the tourists were involved in keeping the beach clean.
I do not
agree
with the statement that individuals cannot do anything to
improve
the environment. Taking care of the environment cannot be the sole responsibility of any
government
or
large
companies
. This is a responsibility of all.
Government
and
large
companies
consist of
people
who
live
in a particular
country and
they are
also
responsible
individually
to take care. The
government
can enact legislations and enforce them to
make
sure that all citizens of a
country
abide by them.
Large
companies
can influence their staff when they undertake measures to take care of the environment and in the process influence their consumers through advertising and promotion. I
live
in Bangladesh, a
country
situated in South Asia. My
country
has the longest
beach
and over time with increased tourists and the associated hotels and businesses around that place it has become
rather
dirty.
Once
of the largest conglomerates undertook an initiative as part of their CSR efforts to
keep
the
beach
clean
. They engaged
local
students and youth in collecting debris and other things that were making the place dirty. The
company
also
worked with the
local
government
to put in bins at various locations at the
beach
and coming up
rules
and regulations to
help
keep
the
beach
clean
. The
local
government
ensured that anyone who is not abiding by the new
rules
of the
beach
are either warned or penalized as necessary. The
company
had extensive promotion around keeping the
beach
clean
and even involved influencing
people
such as
local
celebrities to convey the message. Over time
people
became more conscious and the
beach
gradually
became cleaner. I feel this is an excellent example of how not
only
government
and
large
companies
but
also
the
local
people
and the tourists
were involved
in keeping the
beach
clean
.
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IELTS essay Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.

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  American English
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