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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. 2bbDM
Environment betterment is everyone's responsibility. Though Governments have better infrastructure and funds to build a safe and healthy environment, I urge every human being to do their parts for keeping the environment clean and pure. It is necessary for all the governments to educate their citizens and make them aware of the adverse effects of the Global warming on our beautiful planet. For me, it should start from schools where students should be taught how trees, forests, rainfall, deserts, mountains, plants, bees, waterfalls, rivers play a vitol role in maintaining our eco system. They should also be made aware of the environmental pollution caused from industrial wastes, plastics, deforestation and how Global warming in coming years will affect the environment. Every individual should think about the generations to come and understand the importance of leaving them the earth a better place to live in. Any one can help reduce the toxic gases coming out of the vehicles either by switching to electric driven machines or by using public transports. They can also use bicycles for non essential short travels. People should avoid using plastics and instead they should use recycling bags. Government should encourage people to plant trees in their home. Ruling party should encourage tax payers to enjoy the benefit of less tax by implementing schemes like "Plant a Tree, Get a Tax cut", "Zero Tax for Solar driven electricity". I must admit that people started talking about the criticality and importance of keeping the global warming under control in recent years. They should move on to the next step of doing whatever necessary can be done to keep the planet safe and clean. At the least, they must vote and elect a political party which has better policies and rules to preserve the environmental system
Environment betterment is everyone's responsibility. Though
Governments
have better infrastructure and funds to build a safe and healthy environment, I urge every human being to do their parts for keeping the environment clean and pure.

It is necessary for all the
governments
to educate their citizens and
make
them aware of the adverse effects of the Global warming on our
beautiful
planet. For me, it should
start
from schools where students should
be taught
how trees, forests, rainfall, deserts, mountains, plants, bees, waterfalls, rivers play a
vitol
role in maintaining our
eco system
. They should
also
be made
aware of the environmental pollution caused from industrial wastes, plastics, deforestation and how Global warming in coming years will affect the environment.

Every individual should
think
about the generations to
come
and understand the importance of leaving them the earth a better place to
live
in.
Any one
can
help
reduce
the toxic gases coming out of the vehicles either by switching to electric driven machines or by using public transports. They can
also
use
bicycles for
non essential
short travels.
People
should avoid using plastics and
instead
they should
use
recycling bags.
Government
should encourage
people
to plant trees in their home. Ruling party should encourage
tax
payers to enjoy the benefit of less
tax
by implementing schemes like
"
Plant a Tree,
Get
a
Tax
cut
"
,
"
Zero
Tax
for Solar driven electricity
"
.

I
must
admit that
people
started
talking about the criticality and importance of keeping the global warming under control in recent years. They should
move
on to the
next
step of doing whatever necessary can
be done
to
keep
the planet safe and clean. At the least, they
must
vote and elect a political party which has better policies and
rules
to preserve the environmental
system
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IELTS essay Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.

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296 words
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