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Some people think that good teamwork makes a company successful,other think that good leadership is the reason behind the sucess of a company , discuss both sides and give your opinion

Some people think that good teamwork makes a company successful, other think that good leadership is the reason behind the sucess of a company, discuss both sides and give your opinion Kww8L
Human element play the relevant role to built up one advance organization. Most of the individuals believe better teamwork is one of the important components of successful business. However, other public say without leadership company can not be developed. In addition, good leader is one reason which make organization successful. The purpose of this essay would be compared those both opinion and conclude with my perference. To begin with, every one can share there ideas in teamwok, which is completely beneficial for company. Different employees give various kinds of views as well as opinion that can be helpfuled to solve plenty of issues of organization. In addition, product of business might spread over the community due to the cooperation of staff which are in group. As expected plethara of prospect will be offered to organization by the society because every employees of group give information of company to the public. For example plenty of employees of organization visit society to provide information about company. Hence, it is better for organization to working on team. On the other hand, one good leader can growth company smoothly, without leadership company could not be moved on. Furthermore, staffs need to deal with plenty of customers, which is not possible without chief. Moreover, dirctor should be responsible of all profit and loss of business. Another reason that, all the management system of office is completely depends on leader. For instance, last year when, I visited a company. I found that director is only one person who have been managing most of the issues of business. Therefore, without chief business might not be sucessed. In conclusion, i do believe that, both are important for organization. However, leadership is more vital than working in group.
Human element play the relevant role to built up one advance
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organization
. Most of the individuals believe better teamwork is one of the
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important
components of successful
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business
.
However
, other public say without leadership
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company
can not
be developed
.
In addition
,
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good
leader is one reason which
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make
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organization
successful. The purpose of this essay would
be compared
those both opinion and conclude with my
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perference
.

To
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begin
with, every one can share there
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ideas
in
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teamwok
, which is completely beneficial for
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company
.
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Different
employees give various kinds of views
as well
as opinion that can be
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helpfuled
to solve
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plenty
of issues of
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organization
.
In addition
, product of
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business
might spread over the community due to the cooperation of staff which are in group. As
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expected
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plethara
of prospect will
be offered
to
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organization
by the society
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because
every
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employees
of group give information of
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company
to the public.
For example
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plenty
of employees of
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organization
visit society to provide information about
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company
.
Hence
, it is better for
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organization
to working on team.

On the other hand
, one
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good
leader can growth
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company
smoothly
, without leadership
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company
could not be
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moved
on.
Furthermore
, staffs need to deal with
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plenty
of customers, which is not possible without chief.
Moreover
,
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dirctor
should be
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responsible of
all profit and loss of
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business
. Another reason that, all the management system of office is completely depends on leader.
For instance
, last year when, I visited a
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company
. I found that director is
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only
one person who have been managing most of the issues of
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business
.
Therefore
, without chief
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business
might not be
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sucessed
.

In conclusion
,
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i
do believe that, both are
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important
for
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organization
.
However
, leadership is more vital than working in group.
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IELTS essay Some people think that good teamwork makes a company successful, other think that good leadership is the reason behind the sucess of a company, discuss both sides and give your opinion

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