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Fast food is becoming our part of life everywhere this has bad effect on our lifestyle and diet do you agree or disagree

Fast food is becoming our part of life everywhere this has bad effect on our lifestyle and diet DllRa
Eating habits has been changed significantly in all part of the world. People are consuming fast food to a great extent and it adversely affect their lifestyle and diet. I completely agree with this assertionOne of the major advantages of having a junk food is that it is on healthy diet as ingredient used to prepare this food usually are hard to adjust digest which, results in a communicating fat and lead to the problem of obesity. Also comma regular consumption sometimes become cause forswear health issues such as cancer. Another possible drawback is that fast food is awfully prepared under anhydrous conditions for instance, street food which is often only seen cooked in the market which is full of vehicle and dust. Consuming such kind of food deteriorate people's healthFurthermore, inclination to what the fast food is gradually reducing the family time. In the past days, people usually had dinner together because of this coma they get sufficient time to spend with family members. in contrast, people especially youngsters prefer to have made outside the house maybe in restaurants by sacrificing their family time. As a consequence bonding between family member is getting weaken. Additional, instead of cooking dishes at home people tend to purchase from the market. In conclusion, although fast food has become popular among people I believe that it is deteriorating their health as this food is full of Carbohydrates and not prepared under hygenic conditions
Eating habits has been
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in all part of the world.
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are consuming
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fast
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food
to a great extent and it
adversely
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affect
their lifestyle and diet. I completely
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agree
with this
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assertionOne
of the major advantages of having a junk
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food
is that it is on healthy diet as ingredient
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used
to prepare this
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food
usually
are
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hard
to adjust digest which, results in a communicating
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fat
and lead to the problem of obesity.
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Also
comma regular consumption
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sometimes
become cause forswear health issues such as cancer. Another possible drawback is that
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fast
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food
is awfully prepared under anhydrous conditions
for instance
, street
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food
which is
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often
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only
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seen
cooked in the market which is full of vehicle and dust. Consuming such kind of
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food
deteriorate
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people
's
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healthFurthermore
, inclination to what the
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fast
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food
is
gradually
reducing the
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family
time. In the past days,
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people
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usually had dinner
together
because of this
coma they
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get
sufficient time to spend with
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family
members.
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in
contrast,
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people
especially
youngsters prefer to have made outside the
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house
maybe in restaurants by sacrificing their
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family
time.
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As
a consequence bonding between
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family
member is getting weaken. Additional,
instead
of cooking dishes at home
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people
tend to
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purchase
from the market.

In conclusion
, although
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fast
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food
has become popular among
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people
I believe that it is deteriorating their health as this
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food
is full of Carbohydrates and not prepared under
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hygenic
conditions
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IELTS essay Fast food is becoming our part of life everywhere this has bad effect on our lifestyle and diet

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
239 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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