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individuals are not completely indifferent to environmental protection.

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Over the last few decades, an increase in environmental pollution has been alarmingly considerable. It is argued that many people, it is claimed, are unconcerned about the problem of environmental pollution. I partly agree with this statement, however, individuals are not completely indifferent to environmental protection. In this essay, I will clarify my perspective. Factors that cause environmental pollution can be largely caused by human impacts. People's awareness is still low, typical of producing household waste, cutting trees, and burning trash, . . . which affects the environment and living organisms there. According to the Singapore newspaper, each year, more than 40, 000 residents/visitors are fined for littering in public places. . Besides, the government has not been strict in environmental management, leading to an alarming situation. Many companies, factories, and factories discharge untreated wastewater directly into the sea, the environment, and residential areas. Examples: In Vietnam, Vedan company discharges contamination, but the fine level is still low compared to what they have to pay for the construction of a waste treatment system, many companies still accept violations rather than invest in construction. On other hand, Most people are aware of the importance of the environment. The government has used propaganda to the people The government has used propaganda to the people, the school created extra-curricular activities to train students' consciousness. Clearly, at the Hanoi club, they spend one day a week cleaning the surrounding area. Moreover, people have gradually increased their responsibility to protect the environment, by limiting plastic bags, recycling waste, using public transport and electricity. For example, TocoToco milk tea shop offers a 5% discount when customers bring a bottle of. In include,
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protection. In this essay, I will clarify my perspective.

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affects the
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and living organisms there. According to the Singapore newspaper, each year, more than 40, 000 residents/visitors
are fined
for littering in public places.
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management, leading to an alarming situation.
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companies
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are aware of the importance of the
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. The
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government
has
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used
propaganda to the
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people
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government
has
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used
propaganda to the
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people
, the school created extra-curricular activities to train students' consciousness.
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,
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have
gradually
increased their responsibility to protect the
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environment
, by limiting plastic bags, recycling waste, using public transport and electricity.
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TocoToco
milk tea shop offers a 5% discount when customers bring a bottle of.

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IELTS essay individuals are not completely indifferent to environmental protection.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
276 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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