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Describe a plan you have for the future

Describe a plan you have for the future D2xRa
Well, I have many plans for the future. My first plan or goal is to get Ielts certificate. Now I am trying for this, or rather I am learning an english language in depth at the moment and I am going to get level 8 Ielts certificate in march next year. I work hard for this. Because my direction is an english with depend, that is why I have to development it better. I have to study hard this plan to make for make. Then of course I achive good results. I am trying hard in my way. After I will get Ielts certificate, I will go to the AQSH for study. Aspecially to go New York my dream. I want to study at influential Universites there. After I will succeed, I feel very happy because I have tried lot of for it. Then in next year I will again start implementing other plans.
Well, I have
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for the future. My
first
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plan
or goal is to
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get
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Ielts
certificate.
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rather
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english
language in depth at the
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moment and
I am going to
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get
level 8
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Ielts
certificate in
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march
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year. I work
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english
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that is
why I
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development it better.

I
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study
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hard
this
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for
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I
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achive
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good
results. I am trying
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hard
in my way. After I will
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get
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Ielts
certificate, I will go to the
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AQSH
for study.
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Aspecially
to go New York my dream. I want to study at influential
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Universites
there.

After I will succeed, I feel
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happy
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I have tried
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lot of
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next
year I will again
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start
implementing other
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IELTS essay Describe a plan you have for the future

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
154 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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