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Individuals are living in throwaway society ,where they use things for short time .what are the reasons and problems of this situation .

Individuals are living in throwaway society, where they use things for short time. what are the reasons and problems of this situation. rYYb2
Nowadays, most of the people using products in a disposable way for a limited time of period, which might cause plethora of problems. This essay will discuss the main reasons and problems of this situation. There are numerous cause how people throwaway elastic products after using minimal time, such as advertisments, peer pressure, copy others, show off etcetera. There are plethora of advertisements made by brand industries and these will pay to celebrities to do advertisements of their brands and youngsters attracted by them. Affluent people buy latest expensive products to show off therselves. By these throwaway situation a number of problems occurred. For manufacturing new housholding products, numerous trees are cut daily which creates many other issues as drought, global warming, pollution etcetera. plastic is not a piece of cake to dispose quickly, which release many toxic chemicals. Additionally, peer pressure will make problems as youngsters who are poor and not able to buy expensive products they can deal with mental issues and family disturbance also. In conclusion, this situation create many problems which are not good, to tackle with them every human being should take responsibility if they want good future of themselves and their children.
Nowadays, most of the
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using
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products
Consider replacing "in a disposable way" with the adverb for "disposable"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a disposable way
for a limited time of period, which might cause plethora of
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problems
. This essay will discuss the main reasons and
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problems
of this situation. There are numerous cause how
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people
throwaway elastic
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products
after using minimal time, such as
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advertisments
, peer pressure, copy others,
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show
off etcetera. There are plethora of advertisements made by brand industries and these will pay to celebrities to do advertisements of their brands and youngsters attracted by them. Affluent
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people
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buy
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latest
expensive
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products
to
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show
off
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therselves
. By these throwaway situation a number of
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problems
occurred. For manufacturing new
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housholding
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products
, numerous trees are
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cut
daily which creates
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many
other issues as drought, global warming, pollution etcetera.
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plastic
is not a piece of cake to dispose
quickly
, which release
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many
toxic chemicals.
Additionally
, peer pressure will
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make
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problems
as youngsters who are poor and not able to
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buy
expensive
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products
they can deal with mental issues and family disturbance
also
.
In conclusion
,
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this situation create
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many
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problems
which are not
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good
, to tackle with them every human being should take responsibility if they want
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good
future of themselves and their children.
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IELTS essay Individuals are living in throwaway society, where they use things for short time. what are the reasons and problems of this situation.

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198 words
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