Individual actions have little effect on climate change. For this reason, worthwhile change can only be made at governmental level. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words. v.1
Individual actions have little effect on climate change. For this reason, worthwhile change can only be made at governmental level.  Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.  v. 1
In recent years, it has become more and more obvious that climate change is real and that it is starting to affect our planet badly. Surely, if we continue to pollute the atmosphere with current levels of CO2, the consequences will be enormous. Clearly, the revolution must happen, but whose responsibility is it?
Some peoples argue that the problem is so huge that only international governmental action can have any real impact. Obviously, it is essential for governments to work together on solutions, signing up to agreements and, more importantly, keeping them. Also on a national level, we need to remember that most pollution is caused by industry and that this can be controlled effectively by government action. For example, industries could be made to pay carbon tax on their emissions.
However, while the government must a lead on dealing with climate change, we are also all individually responsible for our own carbon footprint. In fact, the average person in the UK is responsible for about 10 tonnes of carbon emissions a year, while someone in the developing country world only uses around 0. 3 tonnes a year. Furthermore, if we are to prevent temperatures rising by more than 2 degrees, we will all need to use no more than 1. 3 tonnes a year by 2050. This will require a considerable new lifestyle for the average British person. We will need to stop flying regularly, driving when we could just as easily walk and so on.
In conclusion, I would maintain that to protect our planet, and all our futures, we will need a combination of effective international agreements, strong government policies and variation in individual behaviour. 
In recent years, it has become more and more obvious that climate  
change
 is real and that it is starting to affect our planet  
badly
.  
Surely
, if we continue to pollute the atmosphere with  
current
 levels of CO2, the consequences will be enormous.  
Clearly
, the revolution  
must
 happen,  
but
 whose responsibility is it? 
Some
 peoples argue that the problem is  
so
 huge that  
only
 international governmental action can have any real impact.  
Obviously
, it is essential for  
governments
 to work together on solutions, signing up to agreements and, more  
importantly
, keeping them.  
Also
 on a national level, we  
need
 to remember that most pollution  
is caused
 by industry and that this can  
be controlled
  effectively
 by  
government
 action.  
For example
, industries could  
be made
 to pay carbon tax on their emissions. 
However
, while the  
government
  must
 a lead on dealing with climate  
change
, we are  
also
 all  
individually
 responsible for our  
own
 carbon footprint. In fact, the average person in the UK is responsible for about 10 tonnes of carbon emissions a  
year
, while someone in the  
developing country
 world  
only
  uses
 around 0. 3 tonnes a  
year
.  
Furthermore
, if we are to  
prevent
 temperatures rising by more than 2 degrees, we will all  
need
 to  
use
 no more than 1. 3 tonnes a  
year
 by 2050. This will require a considerable new lifestyle for the average British person. We will  
need
 to  
stop
 flying  
regularly
, driving when we could  
just
 as  
easily
 walk and  
so
 on. 
In conclusion
, I would maintain that to protect our planet, and all our futures, we will  
need
 a combination of effective international agreements, strong  
government
 policies and variation in individual  
behaviour
. 
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