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Indian marriage cultural of downy system

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In Indian marriage culture, there is one system that is widely practiced called the dowry system. It is a system that is considered a necessary precondition for marriage. Dowry is a payment of cash or any sort of gifts such as lands, houses, clothes or jewels that can be given from the bride’s family to the groom’s family upon marriage. Traditionally, it was considered to be a symbol of showing respect to the groom’s family. However, the system involved in time, due to factors of economic and sociological change, dowry has become a greater financial burden to the bride's family which is currently being faced by Mr. Ramachandran’s family. Every parent wants their daughter to have a bright future so does Mr. Ramanchandran and his wife. Which has a stable life in the future
In Indian marriage culture, there is one
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system
that is
widely
practiced called the dowry
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system
. It is a
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system
that
is considered
a necessary precondition for marriage. Dowry is a payment of cash or any sort of gifts such as lands,
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houses
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given
from the bride’s
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family
to the groom’s
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family
upon marriage.
Traditionally
, it
was considered
to be a symbol of showing respect to the groom’s
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family
.
However
, the
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system
involved in time, due to factors of economic and sociological
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change
, dowry has become a greater financial burden to the bride's
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family
which is
currently
being faced
by Mr.
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Ramachandran
’s family.

Every parent wants their daughter to have a bright future
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so
does Mr.
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Ramanchandran
and his wife.
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has a stable life in the
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future

IELTS essay Indian marriage cultural of downy system

Essay
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2 paragraphs
133 words
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