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India and culture a brief explanation

India and culture a brief explanation E7rxr
I start with a word full of enthusiasm energy positive mind set every human being living as part of india is very emotionally attached with family members neighbours friends relatives and always try to keep them happy the economy is on the rise and try to make the world more comfortable as we are well aware of the population expansion in India as a result every 5 th human being on this planet earth is indian But we as an indian believe in bondage with every other being irrespective of there country caste religion always work to make the difference small and smaller day on day and will try to make own and others life more happy and lively.
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mind set every human being living as part of
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them happy the economy is on the rise and try to
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make
the world more comfortable as we are well aware of the population expansion in India
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human being on this planet earth is
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indian
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we as an
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indian
believe in bondage with every other being irrespective of there country caste religion always work to
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the difference
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life more happy and lively.
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IELTS essay India and culture a brief explanation

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
119 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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