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Increasing the price of the petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think will be effective? v.1

Increasing the price of the petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. What other measures do you think will be effective? v. 1
To get rid of increasing traffic and pollution, the one of the obvious methods considered is by raising the price of petrol. In my opinion, I agree that the increment in the cost of petrol helps to solve the problem of traffic growth and pollution. However, I also believe that the use of more electric vehicles and eventually, using public transportationtransportation rather than private vehicles will be more effective methods. Mostly, electricity is generated from the renewable sources and there is very less chances of it's exhausting. The use of electric vehicles prevents environment from polluting so that, this can be used as the alternative of petrol for pollution free environment. For instance, the developed nation like Japan, Finland has already started to use electric vehicles instead of the vehicles that requires petrol. Another point to consider is that having well organized and properly managed public transportation service at very affordable price helps to the decrease the growing traffic rate. The more people start using public transportation regularly once they found this cheaper and reliable than having private vehicles. For example, since the year Australian government started properly managing public transportation service at very affordable fare over the country, the number of people using it regularly is increasing. In conclusion, to deal with the problem of increasing traffic and pollution, the using of more electric vehicles than the vehicles consuming petrol and the implementation of well managed public transportation service by the government at best fare is the most effective alternative methods to use.
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get
rid of increasing
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traffic
and
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pollution
, the one of the obvious methods considered is by raising the price of
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petrol
. In my opinion, I
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agree
that the increment in the cost of
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petrol
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helps
to solve the problem of
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traffic
growth and
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pollution
.
However
, I
also
believe that the
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use
of more
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electric
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vehicles
and
eventually
, using
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public
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transportationtransportation
rather
than private
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vehicles
will be more effective methods.

Mostly
, electricity
is generated
from the renewable sources and there is
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very
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less
chances of
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it's
exhausting. The
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use
of
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electric
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vehicles
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prevents
environment from polluting
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so
that, this can be
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used
as the alternative of
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petrol
for
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free environment.
For instance
, the developed nation like Japan, Finland has already
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started
to
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use
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electric
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vehicles
instead
of the
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vehicles
that requires petrol.

Another point to consider is that having well organized and
properly
managed
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public
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transportation
service at
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very
affordable price
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helps
to the decrease the growing
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traffic
rate. The more
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people
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start
using
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public
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transportation
regularly
once they found this cheaper and reliable than having private
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vehicles
.
For example
, since the year Australian
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government
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started
properly
managing
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public
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transportation
service at
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very
affordable fare over the country, the number of
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people
using it
regularly
is increasing.

In conclusion
, to deal with the problem of increasing
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traffic
and
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pollution
, the using of more
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electric
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vehicles
than the
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vehicles
consuming
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petrol
and the implementation of well managed
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public
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transportation
service by the
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government
at best fare is the most effective alternative methods to
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use
.
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33Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Increasing the price of the petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. What other measures do you think will be effective? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
254 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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