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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. nJge
In the past, the only transportation is horse, bike or take a walk. But over time, transportation right now is not just only horse. There's a car, motorcycle, and plane. Modern vehicle is invented not just for take human from one place to another place but it makes for comfy too. The owner of car is in line with increased the population of human. More human more car being purchased. When more car and other vehicle is on the road, there will be numerous joy and of course problems. Example of that problems is traffic and pollution. Car and motorcycle is a common transportation in Indonesia. The function is for our daily transportation and sometimes car and motorcycle is a hobby for some people. Since public transportation in Indonesia is not really good, lot of people is using their personal car and motorcycle. Using personal car is more comfortable due to the fact you had your own privacy. It's safer, you don't have to be worry your stuff is going to missing and it's easier to take you to your destination. There's also bad impact too. When the number of personal vehicle is increased, traffic and polution is going to be anywhere. It makes road users is uncomfortable and easier to get more angry if they stuck in traffic. I agree the solution to solve traffic and polution problems is to increasing the price of petrol so it make all of car owners prefer to using public transportation. And I thought public transportation right now is better than before. There's GoJek, Grab and MRT in Jakarta and Palembang.
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, motorcycle, and
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. Modern vehicle
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for take human from one place to another place
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makes
for comfy too. The owner of
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is in line with increased the population of human. More human more
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car
being
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purchased
. When more
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car
and other vehicle is on the road, there will be numerous joy and
of course
problems. Example of that problems is traffic and pollution.

Car and motorcycle is a common
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transportation
in Indonesia. The function is for our daily
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transportation
and
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sometimes
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car
and motorcycle is a hobby for
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. Since public
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in Indonesia is not
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good
,
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lot of
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is using their personal
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and motorcycle. Using personal
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car
is more comfortable due to the fact you had your
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privacy. It's safer, you don't
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be worry your stuff is going to missing and it's easier to take you to your destination.

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impact too. When the number of personal vehicle
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is going to be anywhere. It
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road users is uncomfortable and easier to
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more angry if they stuck in traffic.

I
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the solution to solve traffic and
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polution
problems is
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to increasing
the price of petrol
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it
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make
all of
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car
owners prefer to
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using
public
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transportation
. And I
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thought
public
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right
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is better than
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. There's
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GoJek
, Grab and MRT in Jakarta and Palembang.
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IELTS essay Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
268 words
5.5
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