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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. Anye
I'm agree with the statement. The increased price of petrol perhaps caused of the increase crued oil. By increase the price of petrol may give some advantages for people and also for environment. If the price of petrol become expensive then people will find it hard to get petrol. Cosequently, a number of people may think twice or more to spend their money to purchase fuel. Probably they will think the money should be spended to more important things. For examples, they can use the money for pay tuition fees, or buy some food, clothes, and any other needs. And if people do not want to buy petrol, the other way to travel or visit a place is by a public transport. Nowadays already a lot of public transportation available. The number of people who buy a private transportation can be reduced. So far the Government already upgrade the amount and also the quality of public transportation. Accordingly, if people use public transport it might reduce traffic jam. Like in Korea for example, numerous people using public transportation as their daily transport therefore rarely traffic jam occur. After that we could see private transportation become a rarity on the streets. If there just a few vehicles on the streets, definitely the pollution will be reduced time by time. And finally the air will be spared from the pollution. Clean air is very important for life. So there is some benefit that can we get if the price of petrol be increased.
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with the statement. The increased
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price
of
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petrol
perhaps caused of the increase
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crued
oil. By increase the
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price
of
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petrol
may give
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some
advantages for
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people
and
also
for environment. If the
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price
of
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petrol
become expensive then
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people
will find it
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hard
to
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get
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petrol
.
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Cosequently
, a number of
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people
may
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think
twice or more to spend their money to
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purchase
fuel.
Probably
they will
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think
the money should be
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spended
to more
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important
things. For examples, they can
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use
the money for pay tuition fees, or
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buy
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some
food, clothes, and any other needs. And if
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people
do not want to
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buy
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petrol
, the other way to travel or visit a place is by a
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public
transport. Nowadays already
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a lot of
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public
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transportation
available. The number of
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people
who
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buy
a private
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transportation
can be
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reduced
.
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So
far the
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Government
already upgrade the amount and
also
the quality of
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public
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transportation
.
Accordingly
, if
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people
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use
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public
transport it might
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reduce
traffic jam. Like in Korea
for example
, numerous
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people
using
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public
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transportation
as their daily transport
therefore
rarely traffic jam occur.
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After
that we could
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see
private
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transportation
become a rarity on the streets. If there
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just
a few vehicles on the streets, definitely the pollution will be
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reduced
time by time. And
finally
the air will
be spared
from the pollution. Clean air is
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very
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important
for life.
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there is
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some
benefit that can we
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get
if the
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price
of
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petrol
be increased
.
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IELTS essay Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
251 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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