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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. 8obB
It is considered that increasing the price of petrol is one of the most important ways to control escalating traffic and pollution problems. However, in my point of view, I completely believe that using other suistainabe sourcess of energy like solar, wind and hydro will immensely help to resolve such issues. First of all, some people think that increasing the cost of petrol will minimize the vehicles and some pollution problems. Nowadays, lots of car already do not use gasoline but, use like batteries or electric cars. However, in spite of levelled up petrol price people will use it as there are no other options available to run vehicles. Furthermore, it will not bring a number of change in solving growing traffic issues and pollution. For instance, my uncle said that when he was on trip to a city, on the highway he saw a car whose fuel was a battery. In addition, the car was unique and could reduce the pollution in this country. On the other hand, if more suistainable energy like solar power or electric cars are used to run vehicles there will be harmfull gases like carbon monoxide or CFC which contributes growing air pollution considerabely. In addition, using solar power to public vehicles would be In result, increasing the cost of petrol is not the best way but, still good if we use it clearly. Meanwhile, there are several ways to forbid pollution and traffc jam, such as using city buses or online motorcycle or taxis.
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that increasing the price of
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is one of the most
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important
ways to control escalating traffic and
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pollution
problems.
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, in my point of view, I completely believe that using other
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sourcess
of energy like solar, wind and hydro will
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help
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people
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think
that increasing the cost of
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petrol
will minimize the
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vehicles
and
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some
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pollution
problems. Nowadays, lots of
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car
already do not
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use
gasoline
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but
,
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use
like batteries or electric
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cars
.
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,
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in spite of
levelled up
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petrol
price
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people
will
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use
it as there are no other options available to run
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vehicles
.
Furthermore
, it will not bring a number of
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change
in solving growing traffic issues and
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pollution
.
For instance
, my uncle said that when he was on trip to a city, on the highway he
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saw
a
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car
whose fuel was a battery.
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, the
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car
was unique and could
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reduce
the
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pollution
in this country.

On the other hand
, if more
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suistainable
energy like solar power or electric
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cars
are
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used
to run
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vehicles
there will be
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harmfull
gases like carbon monoxide or CFC which contributes growing air
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pollution
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considerabely
.
In addition
, using solar power to public
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vehicles
would
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be


In result, increasing the cost of
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petrol
is not the best way
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but
,
still
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good
if we
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use
it
clearly
. Meanwhile, there are several ways to forbid
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pollution
and
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jam, such as using city buses or online motorcycle or taxis.
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IELTS essay Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
251 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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