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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. 7BkX
Many major cities are now facing traffic and pollution problems. Many people say that the most effective way to eradicate this problem is by increasing the petrol price. This essay will argue why I partially agree with the statement, as there are other ways to deal with these issues. Firstly, it is undeniable that increasing fuel prices will aid in dealing with road congestion and global warming. Instead of people who travel to work alone in a four-wheeler, might switch to a two-wheeler or even public transport, as these options are cost-effective. For example, I used to travel to college with my scooter. But due to the increase in petrol prices, I switched to traveling via bus. This approach helps in solving traffic and pollution issues as there are fewer personal vehicles on the road. It will also reduce overexploitation of non-renewable resources. However, an increase in petrol prices does not affect some class of people. A slight increase in the price may not affect the rich. They will continue to purchase branded cars that use a lot of fuel. On the contrary, this will affect the middle class as they are the ones who use public transport on a large scale. An increase in petrol price will reflect in the ticket fare. Because of this, growth in fuel prices may not solve the problem. In conclusion, I believe that in order to solve the traffic jam and pollution problem, the government should implement rules and regulations on the use of personal vehicles and not by increasing the fuel prices. It will sooner or later come into force and save us from global warming.
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major cities are
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now
facing traffic and pollution problems.
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people
say that the most effective way to eradicate this problem is by increasing the
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petrol
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price
. This essay will argue why I
partially
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agree
with the statement, as there are other ways to deal with these issues.

Firstly
, it is undeniable that increasing
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fuel
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prices
will aid in dealing with road congestion and global warming.
Instead
of
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people
who travel to work alone in a four-wheeler, might switch to a two-wheeler or even public transport, as these options
are cost
-effective.
For example
, I
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used
to travel to college with my scooter.
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But
due to the
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increase
in
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petrol
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prices
, I switched to traveling via bus. This approach
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helps
in solving traffic and pollution issues as there are fewer personal vehicles on the road. It will
also
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reduce
overexploitation of non-renewable resources.

However
, an
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increase
in
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petrol
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prices
does not affect
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some
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class
of
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people
. A slight
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increase
in the
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price
may not affect the rich. They will continue to
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purchase
branded cars that
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use
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a lot of
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fuel
.
On the contrary
, this will affect the middle
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class
as they are the ones who
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use
public transport on a large scale. An
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increase
in
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petrol
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price
will reflect in the ticket fare.
Because of this
, growth in
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fuel
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prices
may not solve the problem.

In conclusion
, I believe that in order to solve the traffic jam and pollution problem, the
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government
should implement
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rules
and regulations on the
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use
of personal vehicles and not by increasing the
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fuel
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prices
. It will sooner or later
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come
into force and save us from global warming.

IELTS essay Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
274 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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