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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective? v.27

It is considered that increasing the price of petrol is one of the most important ways to curb escalating traffic and pollution problems. However, in my opinion, I completely believe that using other sustainable sources of energy like solar, wind and hydro will immensely help to tackle such issues. On the one hand, there are people who think that increasing the price of petrol will reduce its use and, thus, decrease rising traffic congestions and pollutions. However, in spite of increased petrol price people will continue to use it as there are no other viable options available to run vehicles. Hence, it will not bring much change in solving growing traffic issues and pollutions. In fact, due to the increase in petrol price cost of goods may increase because of an increase in transportation costs, creating detrimental effects on the economy. On the other hand, if more sustainable energy like solar power, wind power, and hydropower are utilised to run vehicles and factories, there will be less emission of harmful gases like carbon mono oxide and CFC which contributes increasing air pollution considerably. In addition, using solar power to run public vehicles would result in cheap fare. This will encourage people to travel through eco-friendly cheap trams, trains and buses. To conclude, increasing the price of petrol is not the best way to resolve the growing traffic congestions and pollutions. Thus, an effective way to control the aforementioned issues would be to use other renewable sources of energy in the public transport system which can significantly bring down traffic and pollution problems.
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increasing
the
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price
of
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petrol
is one of the most
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important
ways to curb escalating
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traffic
and
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pollution
problems.
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other
sustainable sources of energy like solar, wind and hydro will
immensely
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help
to tackle such issues.

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people
who
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think
that
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increasing
the
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price
of
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petrol
will
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reduce
its
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use
and,
thus
, decrease rising
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traffic
congestions and
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pollutions
.
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,
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in spite of
increased
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petrol
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price
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people
will continue to
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use
it as there are no
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other
viable options available to run vehicles.
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, it will not bring much
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change
in solving growing
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traffic
issues and
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pollutions
. In fact, due to the increase in
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petrol
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price
cost of
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goods
may increase
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because
of an increase in transportation costs, creating detrimental effects on the economy.

On the
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other
hand, if more sustainable energy like solar power, wind power, and hydropower are
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utilised
to run vehicles and factories, there will be less emission of harmful gases like carbon mono oxide and CFC which contributes
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increasing
air
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pollution
considerably
.
In addition
, using solar power to run public vehicles would result in
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cheap
fare. This will encourage
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people
to travel through eco-friendly
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cheap
trams, trains and buses.

To conclude
,
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increasing
the
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price
of
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petrol
is not the best way to resolve the growing
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traffic
congestions and
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pollutions
.
Thus
, an effective way to control the aforementioned issues would be to
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use
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other
renewable sources of energy in the public transport system which can
significantly
bring down
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traffic
and
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pollution
problems.
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IELTS essay Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve the growing traffic and pollution problems. with the statement? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
262 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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