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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective? v.14

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. What other measures do you think might be effective? v. 14
Petrol, oil is the most important ingredients for the vehicle. Most of the vehicles need petrol. Raising the cost of petrol is one of the most valuable ways to improve traffic and pollution problems. I think, this action might be effective, but this is not only solving way to reduce traffic and pollution problems. There are some other different action to control traffic and pollution. Petrol is much needed product. Most of the vehicle cannot run without petrol oil. If petrol price is increased people are limited using their own vehicle. Because, the daily life cost is going to be high. They need to pay extra money for petrol. For example, I have a car. If petrol price is high, I do not want to use my vehicle, in case of emergency. I am trying to use public or other transports to go anywhere. So, I think, many people’s thinking is same as me and this is the one step to reduce traffic and pollution problems. Secondly, many people are using bicycles to go for long distance and walking in the short distance. In this process people, traffic and the environment are all benefited. People can spend a healthy life. Traffic and pollution problems are almost solved. On the other hand, in recent time, many vehicles are running with electricity and gas and these vehicles are Eco friendly. These types of vehicle cannot create pollution, but create traffic jams. If people using this type of vehicle in a large amount, traffic jam cannot be reduced. If petrol price is high, some people still using their own vehicle. That’s creating a huge traffic. In conclusion, the increase petrol price is not a permanent solution. I agree this solution, but there are other solutions. Using bicycles and walking is the best solution to reduce traffic and pollution problem.
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Petrol
, oil is the most
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important
ingredients for the
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vehicle
. Most of the
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vehicles
need
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petrol
. Raising the cost of
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petrol
is one of the most valuable ways to
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improve
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traffic
and
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pollution
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problems
. I
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think
, this action might be effective,
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but
this is not
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only
solving way to
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reduce
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traffic
and
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pollution
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problems
. There are
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some
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other
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different
action to control
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traffic
and pollution.

Petrol is
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much needed
product. Most of the
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vehicle
cannot run without
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petrol
oil.
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If
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petrol
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price
is increased
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people
are limited
using their
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own
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vehicle
.
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Because
, the daily life cost is going to be high. They need to pay extra money for
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petrol
.
For example
, I have a car. If
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petrol
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price
is high, I do not want to
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use
my
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vehicle
, in case of emergency. I am trying to
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use
public or
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other
transports to go anywhere.
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So
, I
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think
,
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many
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people’s
thinking is same as me and this is the one step to
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reduce
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traffic
and
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pollution
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problems
.
Secondly
,
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many
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people
are using bicycles to go for long distance and walking in the short distance. In this process
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people
,
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traffic
and the environment are all benefited.
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People
can spend a healthy life.
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Traffic
and
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pollution
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problems
are almost solved.

On the
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other
hand, in recent time,
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many
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vehicles
are running with electricity and gas and these
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vehicles
are Eco friendly. These types of
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vehicle
cannot create
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pollution
,
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but
create
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traffic
jams. If
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people
using this type of
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vehicle
in a large amount,
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traffic
jam cannot be
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reduced
. If
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petrol
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price
is high,
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some
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people
still
using their
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own
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vehicle
. That’s creating
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a huge traffic
.

In conclusion
, the increase
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petrol
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price
is not a permanent
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solution
. I
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agree
this
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solution
,
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but
there are
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other
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solutions
. Using bicycles and walking is the best
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solution
to
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reduce
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traffic
and
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pollution
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problem
.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
58Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. What other measures do you think might be effective? v. 14

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
306 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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