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Increasing the business and cluture

Increasing the business and cluture Lw65r
At the present time, the proliferation of business and knowing other countries culture are drastically increasing in the globe. Minority of people claim that increasing the business and cluture it is positive development while, other believe that it is bad impact on nation identities. In this essay I discussed the both views. Thus, my inclination with proper justification for the given notion I discussed in the further paragraphs. To begin with, there are numerous reasons why it is positive trends. The first and foremost cause is that, it is helps to improve the economy of particular countries
At the present time, the proliferation of business and knowing other countries culture are
drastically
increasing in the globe. Minority of
people
claim that increasing the business and
cluture
it is
positive
development while, other believe that it is
bad
impact on nation identities. In this essay I discussed the both views.
Thus
, my inclination with proper justification for the
given
notion I discussed in the
further
paragraphs. To
begin
with, there are numerous reasons why it is
positive
trends. The
first
and foremost cause is that, it is
helps
to
improve
the economy of particular
countries
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IELTS essay Increasing the business and cluture

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
96 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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