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If a person becomes successful or unsuccessful it is only because of his or her luck .Do you agree or disagree with the statement

If a person becomes successful or unsuccessful it is only because of his or her luck. XEabP
Hard work is play an important role in human being life without hard work people cannot get success or unsuccessful in their life it is one of his luck. In my opinion, I am fully disagree with this statement. This essay will discuss in up coming paragraph. To begin with, not only luck play role in every place. Since making efforts and hard work also play an important role to achieve their goals in their life. A person can do smart work in his daily ways to achieve their goal while a person cannot do any smart work people cannot achieve their goal
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success or unsuccessful in their life it is one of his luck. In my opinion, I am
fully
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disagree
with this statement. This essay will discuss in up coming paragraph. To
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with, not
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luck play role in every place. Since making efforts and
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hard
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work
also
play an
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role to achieve their goals in their life. A person can do smart
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in his daily ways to achieve their goal while a person cannot do any smart
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cannot achieve their
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IELTS essay If a person becomes successful or unsuccessful it is only because of his or her luck.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
102 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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