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Increasing price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do u agree or disagree? What other measures do u think might be effective?

Increasing price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. What other measures do u think might be effective? 98GW
In this modern age petrol plays crucial role and have been integrated well in our daily lives. With growing petrol consumption, we get to encounter new issues of growing traffic and pollution. Some people believe Increasing price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. I absolutely agree with this notion. Petrol is vital for our day-to-day travel and daily chores. It is a depletable natural resource on which humans highly depend, But with its easy of availability it has been rather taken as for granted. As the population expands so does the vehicles and fuel consumption rates which has in turn birthed serious problems like growing traffic and pollution. Escalating the fuel prices will force people to opt for public transport and encourage sharing their modes of transport thus resulting is less traffic and considerable impact on the rise of pollution. This further will instil co-operative attitude among each other and even promote judicious use of this priceless commodity. But I do believe that the increase of petrol rates will adversely effect on the pockets of the lower middle class, alternate to this solution various other measures can be undertaken like making public transport more accessible and economical. Walking should be promoted by the government. Cycles should be made available to people at marginal rates. In conclusion, from what has been discussed above, increasing the price of petrol can be an effective factor to reduce consumption of this energy, at least in my country. Government should take some immediate steps to counter such emerging complications. Finally, it’s imperative to take quick actions on these surging complexities.
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petrol
plays crucial role and have
been integrated
well in our daily
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lives
. With
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growing
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petrol
consumption, we
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get
to encounter new issues of
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growing
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traffic
and
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pollution
.
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Some
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people
believe Increasing price of
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petrol
is the best way to solve
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growing
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traffic
and
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pollution
problems. I
absolutely
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agree
with this notion.

Petrol is vital for our day-to-day travel and daily chores. It is a
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depletable
natural resource on which humans
highly
depend,
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But
with its easy of availability it has been
rather
taken as for granted. As the population expands
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so
does the vehicles and fuel consumption rates which has in turn birthed serious problems like
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growing
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traffic
and
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pollution
. Escalating the fuel prices will force
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
to opt for public transport and encourage sharing their modes of transport
thus
resulting is less
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traffic
and considerable impact on the rise of
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pollution
. This
further
will
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instil
co-operative attitude among each other and even promote judicious
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use
of this priceless commodity.

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But
I do believe that the increase of
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petrol
rates will
adversely
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effect
on the pockets of the lower middle
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class
, alternate to this solution various other measures can be undertaken like making public transport more accessible and economical. Walking should
be promoted
by the
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government
. Cycles should
be made
available to
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people
at marginal rates.

In conclusion
, from what has
been discussed
above, increasing the price of
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petrol
can be an effective factor to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
consumption of this energy, at least in my country.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Government
should take
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
immediate steps to counter such emerging complications.
Finally
, it’s imperative to take quick actions on these surging complexities.

IELTS essay Increasing price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. What other measures do u think might be effective?

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