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increase the number of priority seats

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Secondly, to increase the number of priority seats will certainly not help promote a culture of care on public transport, but instead lead to more conflicts. Priority seats are widely regarded as seats exclusively reserved for those in need. These seats are treated as sacred and inviolable. Commuters can be wary of occupying priority seats as they may confront disapproving looks or even worse in some cases the nearby passengers may snapshot them without any decent explanation and online bullying takes place. On the other hand, empty priority seats during rush hours are highlighted by online videos since young people are afraid of being reprimanded for sitting on them. Commuters will be more heed of occupying these even if they need to sit down. Indeed, this is a conflict to the original notion to the courtesy on public transport. We believe that increasing the number of priority seats will make the situation worse.

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,

to increase the number of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpreferencearrangement
priority
 seats

will certainly
 not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 promote

a culture of care on public transport,

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but
instead
 lead to more conflicts.

Priority You use this word too often, consider replacing it withchaircouchbench
seats
 are widely
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seats
 exclusively reserved for those in need. These You use this word too often, consider replacing it withchaircouchbench
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are treated
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sacred


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and
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Commuters can be wary of

occupying You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpreferencearrangement
priority
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as they may confront disapproving looks

or even worse in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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the nearby passengers may snapshot them without any decent explanation

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAnd
and
 online bullying takes place.

On the other hand
,

empty You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpreferencearrangement
priority
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withchaircouchbench
seats
 during rush hours

are highlighted
 by online videos

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSince
since
 young This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are afraid of being reprimanded
 for sitting on them.

Commuters will be more heed of occupying these even if they need to sit down.

Indeed
, this is a conflict to the original notion to the courtesy on public transport.

We believe that increasing the number of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpreferencearrangement
priority
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withchaircouchbench
seats
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the situation worse. 