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ince World War 11, there has been an increase in co-operation between many Eastern and western countries. This has led to desire amongst Ss to undertake study abroad and disadv of studying Adv. and disadv. abroad

ince World War 11, there has been an increase in co-operation between many Eastern and western countries. This has led to desire amongst Ss to undertake study abroad and disadv of studying Adv. and disadv. abroad yxJnM
It is true that a lot students migrating from developing country to developed country to Study with more exposure. This situation has some benefits as well as drawbacks. Both the aspects are elaborated in ensuing paragraphs along with examples. There are many advantages of studying abroad. The foremost advantage in academic student get great international exposure. This illustrate students can get chance learn about different culture, food habits, lifestyle, weather etc. Also, help to learn foreign language and it opens door for better job opportunities. The another main advantage become more independent. By this I intend to say that they are responsible for paying bills, Cooking and cleaning; it helps to understand their responsibility better. For instance, according experts 30% men can cook better than women in abroad. To be true, it changes their view towards several aspects of life and work. On the other hand flip side of the coin too should not be ignored. The foremost disadvantage is that living and studying in abroad can be difficult. This is becuase they may face problem while communicating with foreign nationals. The prime concern is some students feel cultural shock. By this, I intend to say that living alone in unfamiliar culture may cause home sickness. In addition, some Students have problem with paper work in visa application. International students are always treated as second citizen of the country thus are devoid of some fundamental rights and obligations. This, to conclude it can be finally said that although few chellenges in studying abroad but I believe, now technology and faster communication make world a smaller places to live and younger generation are more adaptable when it comes to bargaining for better future.
It is true that a lot
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students
migrating from
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developing country
to
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developed country
to Study with more exposure. This situation has
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some
benefits
as well
as drawbacks. Both the aspects
are elaborated
in ensuing paragraphs along with examples.

There are
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many
advantages of studying
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abroad
. The foremost advantage in academic
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student
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get
great international exposure.
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This illustrate
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students
can
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get
chance

learn about
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different
culture, food habits, lifestyle, weather etc.
Also
,
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help
to learn foreign language and it opens door for
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better
job opportunities. The another main advantage

become more independent. By this I intend to say that they are responsible for paying bills, Cooking and cleaning; it
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helps
to understand their responsibility
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better
.
For instance
, according experts 30%
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men
can cook
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better
than women in
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abroad
. To be true, it
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changes
their view towards several aspects of life and work.

On the other hand
flip side of the coin too should not be
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ignored
. The foremost disadvantage is that living and studying in
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abroad
can be difficult. This is
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becuase
they may face problem while communicating with foreign nationals. The prime concern is
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some
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students
feel cultural shock. By this, I intend to say that living alone in unfamiliar culture may cause home sickness.
In addition
,
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some
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Students
have problem with paper work in visa application. International
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students
are always treated as second citizen of the country
thus
are devoid of
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some
fundamental rights and obligations.

This,
to conclude
it can be
finally
said that although few
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chellenges
in studying
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abroad
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but
I believe,
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now
technology and faster communication
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make
world a smaller places to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
and younger generation are more adaptable when it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
comes
to bargaining for
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better
future.
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IELTS essay ince World War 11, there has been an increase in co-operation between many Eastern and western countries. This has led to desire amongst Ss to undertake study abroad and disadv of studying Adv. and disadv. abroad

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
282 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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