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In your opinion, which is a better to prevent graffiti vandalism - to punish those who damage the buildings or to organise official street art graffiti festivals?

In your opinion, which is a better to prevent graffiti vandalism - to punish those who damage the buildings or to organise official street art graffiti festivals? E37aB
There is currently a contentious argument over whether graffiti could be considered a type of art instead of vandalism. I totally agree with this opinion because it is a human right to express their own ideas in whichever way they wish, and people can learn from this art and be inspired by it. The main reason why I believe individuals who do graffiti can be considered artists is because everyone has the right to express ideas and communicate concepts. This is due to the fact that usually, this kind of art has an intention to protest something or even to express some feeling. As well as this, graffiti artists are used to spreading their ideas through art and often exhibit their work in places with many people moving. To illustrate, we can compare with other types of art, like music, pictures, and movies. The main goal of any art is to disseminate a thought to someone who likes it. Another reason why I support that graffiti should not be considered a vandalism is that everyone has learnt something through it, get inspired and even just enjoy a moment after seeing a graffiti. This is because nowadays we have a busy routine and sometimes when we came across some art, for example on the way to work, we feel better and inspired. In conclusion, I completely agree that graffiti is a type of art because it is a way to express ideas and expose sentiment and individuals can learn from art and be inspired. Given this situation, it seems that the government should encourage graffiti artists because it is a part of our culture.
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currently
a contentious argument over whether graffiti could
be considered
a type of
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art
instead
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agree
with this opinion
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because
it is a human right to
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express
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own
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ideas
in whichever way they wish, and
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people
can learn from this
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art
and
be inspired
by it.

The main reason why I believe individuals who do graffiti can
be considered
artists is
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because
everyone has the right to
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express
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ideas
and communicate concepts.
This is due to the fact that
usually
, this kind of
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art
has an intention to protest something or even to
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express
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some
feeling.
As well
as this, graffiti artists are
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used
to spreading their
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ideas
through
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art
and
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often
exhibit their work in places with
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many
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people
moving. To illustrate, we can compare with other types of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
art
, like music, pictures, and movies. The main goal of any
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
art
is to disseminate a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
to someone who likes it.

Another reason why I support that graffiti should not
be considered
a vandalism is that everyone has
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something through it,
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get
inspired and even
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just
enjoy a moment after seeing
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a graffiti
. This is
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because
nowadays we have a busy routine and
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sometimes
when we came across
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some
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art
,
for example
on the way to work, we feel better and inspired.

In conclusion
, I completely
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agree
that graffiti is a type of
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art
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because
it is a way to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
express
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ideas
and expose sentiment and individuals can learn from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
art
and
be inspired
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Given
this situation, it seems that the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should encourage graffiti artists
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it is a part of our culture.
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IELTS essay In your opinion, which is a better to prevent graffiti vandalism - to punish those who damage the buildings or to organise official street art graffiti festivals?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
273 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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