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In universities, people tend to concern more about the career prospect of the subjects they learn. Some people propose that students should learn subjects with a fast job growth including math, science, technology, and engineering even if they are interes v.1

In universities, people tend to concern more about the career prospect of the subjects they learn. Some people propose that students should learn subjects with a fast job growth including math, science, technology, and engineering even if they are interes v. 1
In the era of advancement, the problem of pollution is becoming a controversial topic. Some folks consider that to set the limit of noise a person makes, there should be a law to measure it, because it becomes the cause of noise pollution and disturbance for others. Although, it has some benefits like decrease the noise pollution and to make society equally suitable for everyone, it will responsible to affect the freedom of the people and it might cause for health issues as well. This essay will discuss the advantages and the disadvantages of it. To begin with, the two main advantages to control the noise that a human being is made, are reducing the noise pollution and to create fairness among the whole society. Because, it will help to give a big contribution in order to decrease the noise pollution and the society will feel the sense of equality. For example, if the government sets any role for those persons who make noise in a large amount, then this will help to maintain our environment fresh, and soothes. Also, with the help of a law, the government make a sense of fairness among the people. These are some benefits to make a law against noise pollution. Despite the benefits, lack of flexibility and health problems are two main drawbacks of making a law. Some people might feel that it is affecting their right, because it is a freedom country where everyone has their own personal space and freedom to do whatever they want. Indeed, because of the law, people have to use earphones to talk to anyone and it will create well-being issues like -hearing problems, and headache. For instance, the ministry will force the people to follow the rule, which will affect their freedom, because they have no other option rather than obey the rule. To conclude, noise pollution is increasing day by day and some people want the government to make any law against it. This essay discussed the advantages of it as reducing the noise corruption and fairness among all, including their disadvantages like health issues, and reducing the privilege of the individual.
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noise
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, there should be a
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law
to measure it,
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because
it becomes the cause of
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noise
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pollution
and disturbance for others. Although, it has
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some
benefits like decrease the
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noise
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pollution
and to
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make
society
equally
suitable for everyone, it
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will responsible
to affect the
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freedom
of the
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people
and it might cause for health issues
as well
. This essay will discuss the advantages and the disadvantages of it.

To
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begin
with, the two main advantages to control the
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noise
that a human being
is made
, are reducing the
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noise
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pollution
and to create fairness among the whole society.
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, it will
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help
to give a
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big
contribution in order to decrease the
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noise
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pollution
and the society will feel the sense of equality.
For example
, if the
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government
sets any role for those persons who
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make
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noise
in a large amount, then this will
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help
to maintain our environment fresh, and soothes.
Also
, with the
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help
of a
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, the
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government
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make
a sense of fairness among the
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people
. These are
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some
benefits to
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a
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against
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noise
pollution.

Despite the benefits, lack of flexibility and health problems are two main drawbacks of making a
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.
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Some
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people
might feel that it is affecting their right,
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because
it is a
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freedom
country where everyone has their
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own
personal space and
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freedom
to do whatever they want.
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,
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of the
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law
,
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people
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have to
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use
earphones to talk to anyone and it will create well-being issues like -hearing problems, and headache.
For instance
, the ministry will force the
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people
to follow the
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rule
, which will affect their
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freedom
,
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because
they have no other option
rather
than obey the
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rule
.

To conclude
,
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noise
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pollution
is increasing day by day and
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some
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people
want the
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government
to
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make
any
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law
against it. This essay discussed the advantages of it as reducing the
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noise
corruption and fairness among all, including their disadvantages like health issues, and reducing the privilege of the individual.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay In universities, people tend to concern more about the career prospect of the subjects they learn. Some people propose that students should learn subjects with a fast job growth including math, science, technology, and engineering even if they are interes v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
357 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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