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do you agree or disagree? students should consider studying in fields related to subjects like technology, math, science and so, if even they are more interested in other subjects. v.25

students should consider studying in fields related to subjects like technology, math, science and so, if even they are more interested in other subjects. v. 25
In our country, the government spending huge money in their scientific research and development compares to other R&D's same way they should allocate a plethora of funds for teaching sciences instead of other subjects. I strongly agree that this idea will be more helpful for the country to become strong growth and development. From last decades, every year presidency allocates funds for many departments like schooling, hospitality, banking, and some research institutes like medical, space, etc. , . If they provide an abundance of funds to teach science for students, then it will improve their knowledge and it helps to their carriers, moreover they become best researcher or scientist in the world. However, a nation isn't giving more money to teach sciences, some youths are learning themselves and making achievement in many fields. Allocating funds in science teaching are more essential for the government. If they increase their funds, it will boost the teaching staff's and they will take classes for students with more interest, moreover listener's will not distract and they concentrate on their subjects with dedication. At last, youngster's become good position in the society in the short term and they achieve their goals in a plethora of industries, moreover their needs for the government are more respectful and their creativity will improve a lot, which creates a path for introducing new technologies. To recapitulate, allocating huge funds for the science teaching by the authority of a nation is good news for the country, moreover, in a short span of time they will show their strength in this world.
In our country, the
government
spending huge money in their scientific research and development compares to other R&D's same way they should allocate a plethora of funds for
teaching
sciences
instead
of other subjects. I
strongly
agree
that this
idea
will be more helpful for the country to become strong growth and development.

From last decades, every year presidency allocates funds for
many
departments like schooling, hospitality, banking, and
some
research institutes like medical, space, etc.
, .
If they provide an abundance of funds to teach
science
for students, then it will
improve
their knowledge and it
helps
to their carriers,
moreover
they
become best
researcher or scientist in the world.
However
, a nation isn't giving more money to teach
sciences
,
some
youths are learning themselves and making achievement in
many
fields.

Allocating funds in
science
teaching
are more essential for the
government
. If they increase their funds, it will boost the
teaching
staff'
s and
they will take classes for students with more interest,
moreover
listener's will not
distract and
they concentrate on their subjects with dedication. At last,
youngster's
become
good
position in the society in the short
term and
they achieve their goals in a plethora of industries,
moreover
their needs for the
government
are more respectful and their creativity will
improve
a lot, which creates a path for introducing new technologies.

To recapitulate, allocating huge funds for the
science
teaching
by the authority of a nation is
good
news for the country,
moreover
, in a short span of time they will
show
their strength in this world.
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IELTS essay students should consider studying in fields related to subjects like technology, math, science and so, if even they are more interested in other subjects. v. 25

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
261 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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