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In twenty years from now, students will not use printed books anymore.

In twenty years from now, students will not use printed books anymore. bY3WB
Printed books have never appealed to me. Born in the 21th century, I always regard printed books as something that wastes money and not easy to carry. What makes the matter even worst is that to produce a piece of paper, you may need to cut thousands tons of trees. Therefore, from my perspective, neither is printed books environmental-friendly nor convenient. My arguments for this point are listed as follows. First of all, compared to the electronic form, the cost of printed books is much higher. For instance, as far as I know, the printed version of “Romeo and Juliet" written by Shakespe. . .
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have never appealed to me. Born in the
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21th
century, I always regard
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printed
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as something that wastes money and not easy to carry. What
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makes
the matter even worst is that to produce a piece of paper, you may need to
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thousands tons of trees.
Therefore
, from my perspective, neither is
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printed
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books
environmental-friendly nor convenient. My arguments for this point
are listed
as follows.

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First of all
, compared to the electronic form, the cost of
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printed
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is much higher.
For instance
, as far as I know, the
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version of “Romeo and Juliet
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written by
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Shakespe
.
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IELTS essay In twenty years from now, students will not use printed books anymore.

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  American English
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105 words
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