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D/A Technology designed to make our life simpler actually makes our life more complicated.

D/A Technology designed to make our life simpler actually makes our life more complicated. WygJW

Born in the 21st century, I always regard technology as something that contributes to a simpler life. Technology makes it possible for us to know all the happenings under the sun without stepping outside the door. From my perspective, it offers us convenience which keeps us away from troublesome. Therefore, I totally disagree with the statement that technology actually makes our life more complicated. First of all, technology such as telephone leads to the tendency of working at home. As you see, today nothing could be more tiresome than working at office. You have to be sandwiched between. . .

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technology
 as something that contributes to a simpler life. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
Technology
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makes
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keeps
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, I totally
 disagree with the statement that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
 actually This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 our life more complicated.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
 such as telephone leads to the tendency of working at home. As you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
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today
 nothing could be more tiresome than working at office. You This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
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